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Post by brokenbox on Dec 29, 2010 14:01:19 GMT -8
[JUNE] - [THE TAILOR]
Number/Name: June once had a number, but it has worn off. He simply goes by the name 'June' because he saw the month on a calendar and adopted it as his name. |
Number Placement: It used to be on the middle of his back, but it has worn out. |
Gender: He appears to look like a female, but is actually a male. |
Years since Creation: June has threaded this land for four years. |
Date of Creation: He was created on June 19th, but he had awoken on July 2nd. |
Alignment: Racketeer (Salesman). |
Height: He stands a full six inches. |
Fabric: June was made out of cream colored polyester. |
Metal: June's skeletal is made out of aluminum metal. |
Anomalies: June has long legs that allow him to run great distances in short period of time. |
Accessories: June carries a needle, a blade, a small pin and a small amount of thread with him at all times. Something he may carry fabric with him. | Abilities: June knows how to make and fix doll clothing, a skill that he taught to himself after stumbling on a fashion magazine. He also has a knowledge in basic hand-to-hand combat. |
Weapon(s): June carries a small blade that is tucked safely in his kimono. He also has a pin, though it's mainly used to hold his hair up in a bun. |
Appearance: June looks like any other doll, except for his long black artificial hair (it came from a wig), and bright red kimono. It is made out of bright red fabric that he spent nights on making since he was very new to sewing. After multiple tries, he managed to complete the clothing. The sash is just a red silk ribbon that he found in the remains of a fabric shoppe (which became his haven for a while). The sleeves are short and only reach up to his elbows.
The inside of his kimono has a small pocket that he keeps some small valuable things in.
His kimono covers the several small scars that he had received when he had awoken.
Sometimes his hair is held up into a messy bun by a pin. |
Personality: Submissive by personality, June makes the perfect follower. He is a good natured fellow who enjoys the company of others, and is very easy to get along with. He yields to anyone stronger than he to avoid fights. And the lack of an aggressive nature makes him weak in combat.
Though, fighting physically and fighting verbally are clearly two different things. He doesn't do that well in fist-fights, but arguing is a whole new level. Getting into arguments is something that he is good at, and his stubborn and determined attitude just adds up to it. But alas, because of the loss of his brother (who was the polar opposite of him), he rarely argues anymore.
He is determined to please the ones above him and is not afraid to speak his mind. Around friends he is less-submissive and bolder. June tends to be a play it safe guy, but even since the loss of his brother, he has learned to take risks. |
Other Information: He used to have a brother, but due to an accident he passed away. His brother was very adventurous and bold. He could be described by June, "very loud and rude, though he means well." June claims that his brother's adventurous personality rubbed off on him. | Theme Song: "Starts with One" by Shiny Toy Guns | Voice Actor: David Wenham |
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Post by setsup on Jan 4, 2011 6:36:40 GMT -8
Blargh, sorry for the wait, Boxy. Looks good to me so far (aside from the overwhelming orangeness, that takes a little getting used to, haha). I'm curious about this deceased brother he has.
One more sweep for grammar - you have a word or two left out here and there - and you should be good to go!
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Post by brokenbox on Jan 4, 2011 12:31:35 GMT -8
I checked the grammar and fixed a few things, I hope it's good now. And I added in one missing word (it's all that I could find ._. ).
Is s'okay! And sorry about the orangeness. I wanted to use red, but then I felt a bit repetitive since I already used red on a profile. I also added a bit more information on June's brother's personality.
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Post by setsup on Jan 5, 2011 17:03:12 GMT -8
As for the orangeness, I've seen much much worse, haha. Don't feel too bad. My personal tastes tend to run toward using colors as more of an accent =p
I also recall English isn't your first language, correct? The other places I caught where you'd left words out are (suggested ones are inserted in red):
Even though he doesn't do that well in fist-fights, arguing is a whole new level.
But alas, since the loss of his brother (who was the polar opposite of him), he rarely argues anymore.
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Post by brokenbox on Jan 6, 2011 14:34:10 GMT -8
Ahaha! And you're correct! English isn't my first language. My first language is Finnish.
As for the missing words, I filled the spots in -can't believe that she over looked them-. I hope it's better now. ^_^
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Post by setsup on Jan 6, 2011 19:07:59 GMT -8
Much better, yes indeed!
ACCEPTED~
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